tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177680137470507199.post2917243402175451970..comments2023-03-05T20:32:37.234-08:00Comments on Through Colour Blind Eyes: Chapter 20 - Gen 1 - LillyJuliehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04784217998578574056noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177680137470507199.post-34553727993663885892014-08-05T04:04:34.724-07:002014-08-05T04:04:34.724-07:00Ok I thought the last chapter was sad but this one...Ok I thought the last chapter was sad but this one is worse! Maybe I shouldn't have read both right after each other. Mango leaving on top of losing Cosmic and the baby is going to be so hard on Lilly. I can see why Mango still feels he needs to leave. DandyLion240https://www.blogger.com/profile/01133336441627085942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177680137470507199.post-25779699608260699292013-08-08T13:50:42.864-07:002013-08-08T13:50:42.864-07:00I'm glad Prelude made it out of surgery okay, ...I'm glad Prelude made it out of surgery okay, I hope he continues to recover. =( I'm still really sad about Cosmic, he and Lilly looked like they really loved each other. Don't know why Mango still wants to take that other job, since the reason he needed to leave was because of Cosmic, and now... *sniff* Cosmic's gone, but I suppose it'd still be hard because Lilly will still remember Cosmic and miss him.LateKnightSimmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07641353218072486154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177680137470507199.post-88378430303093068742013-01-29T07:40:37.629-08:002013-01-29T07:40:37.629-08:00thanks!!! Yes poor Lilly - she is getting a rough...thanks!!! Yes poor Lilly - she is getting a rough ride :/Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784217998578574056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177680137470507199.post-76537026191992047442013-01-28T20:09:45.772-08:002013-01-28T20:09:45.772-08:00Fantastic chapter! Poor Lilly :(Fantastic chapter! Poor Lilly :(- Vividhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13671375508480648687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177680137470507199.post-2201613671617250152013-01-23T20:37:07.290-08:002013-01-23T20:37:07.290-08:00LOL - I wander sometimes where this is going mysel...LOL - I wander sometimes where this is going myself - while Ive stuck to the life I gave Lilly Ive wandered off track a few times and ended up with double the amount of chapters I planned for the first generation - and im not finished yet. Without giving too much away - Mango's basic logic behind going - he set the wheels in motion to leave before cosmic died - yes its bad timing but - she doesn't love him now - will she ever? - does he want to stick around for the rest of his life torchuring himself on the off chance that she will?? He doesn't know what is going to happen in his future yet - But you know Ive still got a few spanners to throw at them yet so anything can happen :) As for the "shell story" as you put it - I might throw in another unplanned white room chapter soon which might help - but I havent decided yet.<br /><br />I have struggled with this chapter and the next one which I am part way through writing because the subject is a little too close to home as you can imagine - but in a way im finding it helps me a little.<br /> Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784217998578574056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177680137470507199.post-57792047451615316482013-01-23T18:55:49.615-08:002013-01-23T18:55:49.615-08:00Woo. This was a rough chapter. I almost put off re...Woo. This was a rough chapter. I almost put off reading it. I am curious as to why Mango thinks he has to leave. Before, I'd assume it was because being near Lily was destroying him, but now everything has changed.<br /><br />She should go with him. There's almost nothing left for her in this town. I wonder if that's where this is going. Now it appears that you might be hinting that Lily's shell story is in a hospital psyche ward, but it appears that it happened later if her memories of her budding relationship with Mango are actually memories rather than dreams. But now I'm not sure what is real. Heh. Nice storytelling.<br /><br />I really feel for all that you're going through, and I'm glad you're posting.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04337024981563768259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177680137470507199.post-31061921672699593792013-01-23T16:55:23.844-08:002013-01-23T16:55:23.844-08:00Thank you you're so sweet :) I am not too bad ...Thank you you're so sweet :) I am not too bad thanks. My Dad is struggling the most getting used to living alone after 47 years of marriage - he is finding it very hard and I can't even imagine what he is going through!! Juliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04784217998578574056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4177680137470507199.post-81399606593670460922013-01-23T16:39:15.632-08:002013-01-23T16:39:15.632-08:00The whole thing is just so sad! Mango sure does ha...The whole thing is just so sad! Mango sure does have poor timing doesn't he! <br /><br /><br />Julie, I hope you and your family are doing well with the loss you recently had. Just know that I have kept you in my thoughts this last month. ((Hugs))IneptBubbleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04225530955955657531noreply@blogger.com